11-05-2004, 03:44 PM | #1 | |
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need a proof reader, help please....
hey guys,
I'm now the official moderator over at the telltalegames forums and have been struck with the task of creating some rules. I've run this by troy and he said to go ahead and post them after i change some punctuation and spelling errors. I'm sure that all of you know my capability of punctuation and spelling, so I'm asking that one of you guys read it over and tell me what needed to be fixed. i fixed as much as i could find. Quote:
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11-05-2004, 05:06 PM | #2 | |
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I'm no grammar virtuoso either, but I'll do the best I can...here's a sort of corrected version of it:
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11-05-2004, 05:39 PM | #3 |
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Congrats on your modship, g_g! 8-)
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11-05-2004, 06:20 PM | #4 | |
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A few more edits to what Kode posted:
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11-05-2004, 08:36 PM | #5 | |
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Congrats! It's only fair since you played "some" part in their founding And I think emily's is flawless, but perhaps the second rule should be slightly adjusted..
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11-05-2004, 11:10 PM | #6 |
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Fov, you're right! Warning a post? Should've noticed that.
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11-06-2004, 02:23 AM | #7 |
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thanx guys..for all the help...unfortunetly tonite i wont post it becuase i'm a little drunk
i just got to new jersey (my home ) about 6 hours ago and we all selebrated by getting a little drunk...i'm on my 8th beer wich will be my last... good nite everyone and have a great day...i'm so glad to be home for the first time in soo long, i'm realy going to miss this place when i leave. bye bye |
11-06-2004, 09:50 AM | #8 | |
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Just kidding, I wish I could drink 8 beers and be as coherent... (your spelling and grammar didn't suffer!) emily Last edited by fov; 11-06-2004 at 10:00 AM. |
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11-06-2004, 10:17 AM | #9 | |
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11-06-2004, 11:45 AM | #10 | |
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11-06-2004, 12:06 PM | #11 | |
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