11-23-2007, 12:46 AM | #1 |
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Surprise! I’ve written another game!
I know, I know, it’s been so soon since the last one’s been released, but I now have a new game-like thing up for download! It’s called “Pigeons in the Park”, and it essentially consists of two strangers having a conversation on a park bench. It’s very short, along the lines of “When We Were Kids”, but completely puzzleless. And it’s incredibly cute, if I do say so myself. Download!
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11-23-2007, 01:28 AM | #2 |
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That was pretty cool actually. Lol, and that girl who though he was asking her out, when he was just being polite.
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11-25-2007, 11:30 AM | #3 |
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Awesome, as now usual!
Obviously I see what you were going for, but I think it would improve the overall interaction and experience a ton if you did something even so subtle as to have the eyes shift towards the other person when they are talking directly to them, rather than always forward. And a step further, having the mouths be happy or plain when appropriate would add a lot to the feeling of the game. It isn't needed, I just thought I'd toss out a suggestion with my post. Either way, it was very interesting and fun to go through a bunch of times. By the end I was trying my best to see if there was an "ending" where the girl would accept a potential date. Maybe I'll go back later and see what the "worst" ending could be... (What I perceive as worst, of course, since I think the point you're making is that it's all how you look at things...)
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11-25-2007, 03:28 PM | #4 |
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I was thinking of doing facial expressions before, actually (and changing camera angles and stuff; this was originally going to be a 3D game, as I mentioned on my blog), but wound up not really having time for them; final exams are coming up soon and all. Just wanted to get the concept out there, because I'm in an experimental phase.
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11-25-2007, 03:39 PM | #5 |
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A fun little thing, but very rough on the edges, could have needed more polish, but a good concept, I think you should continue with something else in the style of this.
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11-26-2007, 03:23 AM | #6 |
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fun little game... good for a rainy day when you are bored
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