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Old 02-06-2004, 11:27 AM   #10
Kingzjester
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Originally Posted by Erkki
The paragraphs are so long that I suspect it's boring. I'll read it when I'm bored.
What do you mean long? All the paragraphs are two sentences long.... oh... I see...
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