I liked it!
I think it's a good thing it's a short story, because I daren't guess how long you'd be able to keep up all that witticism, the wonderous anecdotes and the quite heavy style. It was a tough piece to read (tough as in: it usurps a lot of energy through its narrative style), but very well worth it! It's comedy in a different way than Pratchett or Adams, which is good for all its originality.
