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Old 02-24-2005, 11:20 AM   #7
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I think it's awesome that you're going to go into this business. I hope it works well, and I'll try and dig up some photos for you.

In the meantime, I've got a couple of crits on the pictures.

#1: The joints on the girl's hands could use a bit more work, as in the shadow not being so thick.

#2: I like the way the fountain is highlighted with the red roses and all, but I think the picture has too much contrast. Lowering that a bit might be better, but I might just be talking out of my arse.

#3: The part where it used to say "Morrab Gardens" looks pretty rough, you can see some heavy repetitions there.

Besides that, top notch!
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