A suggestion: less focus on the casual games, even if that's what she's been doing for the past 8 years. More focus on her work on adventure games.
"Casual game" is almost a dirty word to most serious adventure game fans. That could turn someone off from even finishing reading the article if they're not familiar with Jane's previous work.
And you may want to find a way to get her adventure game credentials mentioned right away. Maybe something like this would be more eye catching as a first paragraph:
Acclaimed game designer Jane Jensen -- creator of the Gabriel Knight series, Gray Matter, co-creator of King's Quest 6, and an award winning novelist -- is forming her own game studio. Pinkerton Road will be a company that's dedicated to creating quality point-and-click adventure games, the likes of which have not been seen in over a decade.
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