[Ascovel]

I played through the whole demo. A few quick thoughts:

I think the disturbing issues will be managable for most people, as long you keep treating them seriously later on in the game.

The game's reality is too depressing. I mean the dullness of the main hero's life. I understand you aimed for it to be like that, but maybe you could add just a touch of color to all the "greyness" to hook in the player more. Maybe some humor would do it. Or give the hero some special atribute, like an adventurer's cap or a leisure suit or something.

Some of the musical themes didn't feel adequate to me. For example, the music in the office is too cheerful to fit the everyday boredom vibe of the place.

It would be good to add the missing bathrooms and kitchens to the apartments.

Just an idea. Maybe a short scene of the janitor reacting to the hero stealing the cat could be fun.