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Old 05-05-2006, 12:13 PM   #92
Len Green
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Just finished the game.
EXCELLENT and C O N G R A T U L A T I O N S !!

I have found some evidence regarding the disapperance of your daughter
Should be .............
I have found some evidence regarding the disappearance of your daughter

You shall get a lifetime supply of cheese,
Should be .............
You will get a lifetime's supply of cheese,

MAJOR NITPICK... If you are making the alterations, then maybe you'll add just 2 letters ..............
If I could get to her room ........ (in 2 places I think ???)
Preferably:-
If I could get into her room ........
**** There is no problem whatsoever in getting TO the princess' room. The only question is how to get INTO the room !
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