Does look good. I await further news on this.
I notice that you're Turkish. Whilst your English is very good, I still think that recruiting English proofreaders is worthwhile. They can make the difference between the player understanding you and dialogue sounding completely natural.
Actually, come to think of it, a lot of games I've seen by native Endlish speakers would have benefited from a bit of proofreading.
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A thread most controversial, that’s what I want to start
Full of impassioned arguments, of posting from the heart
And for this stimulation all will be thankful to me
On come on everybody it won’t work if you agree
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