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Old 06-14-2009, 10:59 AM   #2
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Hey,

Just gave the demo a try. I really like the graphical style.

I also really like the the fairy-tale feel of the story.

However, if I'm honest I couldn't really understand what was going on aside from the basic premise of the game. Before you release the full version I would recommend you get someone to go through and check the dialog. The way certain things are written is a little strange and at times makes no sense at all. Your English is clearly good but there are sentences where you need to switch words around in order for them to fully make sense. If you would like some help with sorting this aspect of your game then feel free to PM me and I'll happily lend a hand.

I also didn't like the inventory GUI at the top of the screen. It detracts from your backgrounds. In my opinion it would look better if it was made smaller or moved to the bottom of the screen.

Anyway, on your blog I see you're asking if people will be interested in this game. I definately think they will be and I hope you do go ahead and finish it because you're game has alot of promise. Good luck with it!
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