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Old 01-31-2008, 09:43 AM   #12
stepurhan
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Here's a rock ballad to be going on with anyway.

Now that you’re gone – an angsty rock ballad for Trum Bon Jovi.

Dull echoes mark the falling of my hot tears
I cry myself to sleep most every day
Wake ev’ry morning, have to face my worst fears
The awful truth that you have gone away

CHORUS
Now that you’re gone, my world is dark and lonely
Now that you’re gone, my whole life feels so wrong
I’m sorry that I hurt you, and wish I could have you back
That’s why I put my feelings in this song.

Was my suspicious mind led to your going
My constant accusations were not just
Forgive a jealous fool for never knowing
He’d found a girl that he could truly trust

CHORUS

The day you left me I could not believe it
How had something so good turned out so bad?
Threw love away, please babe let me retrieve it
Don’t leave me lying here so very sad.

CHORUS

If you come back then please do not deride me
Swear I’ll do all I can so we’ll not part
Do everything to keep you there beside me
Hold a warm place for you inside my heart

MODIFIED FINAL CHORUS
Now that you’re gone, my world is dark and lonely
Now that you’re gone, my whole life feels so wrong
You know the score, can’t take no more, so babe what do you say?
Please answer quickly to my woeful song.
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A thread most controversial, that’s what I want to start
Full of impassioned arguments, of posting from the heart
And for this stimulation all will be thankful to me
On come on everybody it won’t work if you agree
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