Welcome to AG, lemmy and Binky.
(You two weren't in Laverne & Shirley, were you?)
Impressive looking screens! The quality of the art of obvious, but I'll be the first to question your decision making about the girl. I thought the only games that still depicted women like this were the action games intended to lure 15 year old boys to slobber over. I mean, does any
serious game go this far overboard anymore? Unless there's some internal game reason for her to look like a total sleaze, I think you'd be much better off showing SOME discretion in how you present her.
And in case anyone points to this thread to show how the portrayal still works, there's a big difference between a screenshot and a whole game of something. It's one thing to look at, and another to accept as a believable character.
I wouldn't have said anything, but since your final art is only at 15%, I figured a little constructive questioning wouldn't hurt.